post 'Nice Looking Boot Screen Without Plymouth'

_posts/2021-05-28-pretty-boot-screen-no-plymouth.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ up trying to make my system boot process look decent without using Plymouth.
 ## Custom initcpio hooks
 
 You can place custom shell scripts in `/etc/initcpio/hooks`, and have a script
-to install it to the initramfs in `/etc/initcpio/install`. This is more detailed
+to install it to the initramfs in `/etc/initcpio/install`. This is detailed further
 in the [Arch Linux wiki page](https://wiki.archlinux.org/title/mkinitcpio).
 
 You'll want to create a file named "welcome" or any other name you want in
@@ -21,7 +21,6 @@ like:
 
 ```
 #!/bin/sh
-
 run_hook() {
 	echo -e "Welcome to YOUR_COMPUTER, YOUR_NAME."
 	echo -e "Getting everything set up for you..."
@@ -104,4 +103,5 @@ type the correct password, I'm greeted by my laptop, and it loads everything up.
 
 I hope this has been helpful not only for making a cool boot screen without
 Plymouth, but I hope I also helped you learn more about how Arch Linux boots its
-system using an initramfs.
+system using an initramfs. If anything is unclear, email me via the address at
+the bottom of the page, and I'll update this post.